The Storm
The storm is a snapping alligator trying to get away from a hunter.
murder intended and deadly.
It runs as fast as a cheater and can stop a rhino in its path.
Its black as a black hole and green as flax.
The storm is so loud people hear bones break and every person gets a chill up their spine.
The storm come up from the shore and makes a earthquake.
The ground Is ripped up and buildings are in half.
The storm is careful and easily confused.
The storm rages and roars.
The storm is deadly and and silly.
By Ollie
Buddy edit by Ben
hi my name is Spencer i like your pitcher and writing but can you use a different sentence starter
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