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Friday, 22 June 2018

The old man

Me and the old man


Have you ever seen the bridge at the creepy stream. Well I’ve been on the other side of it. there was a house and a old man that lives there. he's really crazy and he almost got me, but I just got him off my tail.

 I saw a train track going into the water, then I found a key with a note saying if you have  found this key you will get treasure in the basement of the man in the house and I also found a notebook and a pencil  and when I got out I found a dog and the dog said to me “that if I don't leave now he will steal your cookies”. Then I said “nooo not my cookies” then I ran as fast as I can but when I was almost at the bridge the old man saw me and he ran in front of the bridge.

 just then the dog that told me about the old man came in barking at him. while the old man was busy with the dog I ran for it and I never went to the other side ever again. the end.

Buddy edited by Olivia

By Ollie

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