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kia ora friends
we made a comic for tips so other people can do the same.

My bridge

This is a suspension bridge and my class is making bridges because  there are bridges being made in Ōtaki. They are building an expressway to improve the traffic. 

Reversibility strategy

My class has been practising the reversibility strategy don't subtract add. I feel good about this strategy because it gets easy when you practise  it.

Rubbish free school

This is a poster about rubbish free schools in New Zealand. We would love to be the first rubbish free school in New Zealand.

Hello this poem is about a storm that is a animal and describes 

The Storm


The storm is a snapping alligator trying to get away from a hunter.
murder intended and deadly.
It runs as fast as a cheater and can stop a rhino in its path.
Its black as a black hole and green as flax.
The storm is so loud people hear bones break and every person gets a chill up their spine.
The storm come up from the shore and makes a earthquake.
The ground Is ripped up and buildings are in half.
The storm is careful and easily confused.
The storm rages and roars.
The storm is deadly and and silly.


By Ollie

Buddy edit by Ben

The old man

Me and the old man


Have you ever seen the bridge at the creepy stream. Well I’ve been on the other side of it. there was a house and a old man that lives there. he's really crazy and he almost got me, but I just got him off my tail.

 I saw a train track going into the water, then I found a key with a note saying if you have  found this key you will get treasure in the basement of the man in the house and I also found a notebook and a pencil  and when I got out I found a dog and the dog said to me “that if I don't leave now he will steal your cookies”. Then I said “nooo not my cookies” then I ran as fast as I can but when I was almost at the bridge the old man saw me and he ran in front of the bridge.

 just then the dog that told me about the old man came in barking at him. while the old man was busy with the dog I ran for it and I never went to the other side ever again. the end.

Buddy edited by Olivia

By Ollie

Oliver

All About Me

Talofa lava my name is Oliver and my nickname is Ollie and I am a year 6 at school and I live in Otaki and my birthday is in March.
I go too Waitohu School  and my favorite subject is art and I'm part samoa and part england and my lucky number is 80.