I am a student at Ōtaki College in Ōtaki, NZ. My blog is a place where I will be able to share some of my learning. Please note....some work won't be edited - they are just my first drafts, so there may be some errors. I would love your feedback, comments, thoughts and ideas on my posts.
Wednesday, 17 June 2020
The new hunt (Last paragraph)
As the boy was running home it was getting dark out. A pack of wolfs howled under the moon getting ready to hunt, as they ran the boy gets a chill down his spine then out of the blue. The pack of wolfs came running and managed to get on his tail as he was getting close to hi home. Then a flash of light. And as sudden as the light appeared he was somewhere else. Then a man walked into the room with an animal skull on his head.
To be continued
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Hello Archie It's me Oliver and thank you For this comment and I will make sure to put a photo on it
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